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You've certainly learned how to handle the difficult bits and your response to it has been impressive.In doing this, what can you say about technology, your view of the background of web publishing, and what you have found that you didn't know before?That would lead you on to the next point -The technology you must write about includes the Mac, but must also include the other software, the process of 'serving' it (ie the server that might be used), and some discussion of the world wide web and how it is transmitted.Have you got some pie charts to put into the audience bit - because they are visual, they help our understanding of what you are saying. If 21 to 30 is the age bracket you must aim at, what gender is it, what race? What are their interests, hobbies, past times, preferences in film, TV and food and all that sort of thing. The statistics need to paint a bigger picture of the audience.The media institution is actually the World Wide Web, which is served by hundreds of companies doing lots of different things. You've traced some of these companies, and maybe you need a little more research: actually, any Mac computer can be a web server, and all you need is a connection into the WWW - and you could add a registered domain name, although an IP address is sufficient. Have a look at http://web.me.com/morrmedia/AUDIENCE_AND_INSTITUTION/Digital_Distribution.html.Your video work needs to be completed.You've done a good job on the whole list of things that you need, but do double check (below).Your job now is to refine and extend your 7 points. Number 3 needs to be dealt with carefully. Make sure your survey is telling us more about 2, 4 and 5.I'd like to see you work this up to a B, please.These are your AS Blogspot posts1. Review done2. Website analysis and review done3. Survey starter done, but needs some explanation.4. Media brief - I'm not sure that this is done, so please check it. This is the brief for your main website5. Website annotations done6. Improved brief - check this too, please.7. Young and Rubicam survey result and comment done8. Website research findings done, but see if you can improve this.9. Main survey - improve this so that we can see all the results published on the blog.followed by the seven points (you must read and use Seven point evaluation)10 i. In what ways . . . conventions11. ii. Represent social groups12. iii. Who is your audience13. iv. How do you attract an audience14. v. Website distribution15. vi. What have you learned about technology16. vii. What have you learned in the progression from first site to main site.